Monday, August 1, 2011

Argumentative Essay - Brainstorming

Topic: At what age should a person be considered an adult?
18
1. possible to think deeply enough.
    1) learn many things at school      
    2) can distinguish what they should do, or what they should not do

2. physically grown up.
    1) look old enough (usually)
       -> not be thought as a child
    2) protect their bodies by themselves
      
16 can be considered as an adult. --------------> they still need time to experience more.   

1 comment:

  1. You did a very good job for your brainstorm. You think 18 is the age for a person to be considered an adult. You give two main reasons to support your opinion. In the same time, you refutation the idea of “16 can be considered as an adult”. I think you may need to add more supporting ideas in your supporting paragraph.

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