Wednesday, July 27, 2011
Narrative Paragraph
I have punished so many times for doing something wrong during my life. I remember one thing that I had really hard time with my parents and teacher. One day, I hung out with my friends instead of going to school. You can probably guess that I lied to some people at that time. I lied to my parents that the class was canceled because of teacher's illness. Of course, my teacher was totally fine. I missed the math school that I went to, and I went to shopping mall, movie theater, and other things that I could do with my friends. I used almost $100 and came back home at 12 o'clock at that time. At last, my teacher called my parents that I was absent that day, and my parents were waiting for me at very late night. They were very disappointed to me not only about using much money, but also about lying to them. I apologized to my parents and called my teacher in the morning that I lied to her. By this experience I could learn that I should never lie anymore.
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The author was talking about he had did so many wrong things in his life. Then, he took one of his experiences as an example. He had lied to his parents and teacher when he decided to skip school. But later, his teacher discovered his was lying. After that, his teacher called his parents; therefore, he got punish by his parents. From this occurrence, the author learned that he should not lie to anyone. The author gives reader a clear idea about what happen, who’s included, and what the author got from this event. The author had done a very good job in his narrative draft.
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